Correcting Run-On Sentences
A run-on sentence occurs when trying to join two or more independent clauses together without proper punctuation. Run-on sentences can be very confusing to read since it is difficult to tell where one thought ends and another begins. Here is an example of a run-on sentence:
My sister Julie loves to write she has had several short stories published.There are five ways to correct a run-on sentence.
- Use two separate sentences.
My sister Julie loves to write. She has had several short stories published.
- Use a coordinating conjuction and a comma. These are the most common coordinating conjunctions : and, but, for, nor, or, so, yet.
My sister Julie loves to write, and she has had several short stories published.
- Use a subordinating conjunction. These are the most common subordinating conjunctions: after, although, as, because, before, if, since, unless, until, when, whereas, while.
My sister Julie loves to write because she has had several short stories published.
- Use a semicolon.
My sister Julie loves to write; she has had several short stories published.
- Use a semicolon and a conjunctive adverb with a comma. These are the most common conjunctive adverbs: consequently, furthermore, however, in fact, indeed, moreover, nevertheless, then, therefore.
My sister Julie loves to write; in fact, she has had several short stories published.
- Be very careful not to use a comma alone to correct a run-on sentence. Doing this will result in what is known as a comma splice.
My sister Julie loves to write, she has had several stories published.
- When using a comma to correct a run-on, be sure to use a coordinating conjunction along with it.
- To get more practice in correcting run-on sentences, look below.
Run-On Sentence Worksheet
Most of the following sentences are run-on sentences. Punctuate the sentences which are incorrect.
- My father retired from the Air Force last year he is writing a book about his experiences.
- Jeff mowed the grass this morning and tonight he will water the flowers and bushes.
- The small girl seemed to be lost, she was crying and looking for her mother.
- Mrs. Dawson inherited a large sum of money from her brother so she can buy a new car now.
- Kathy and Jerry worked very hard on their project therefore they felt they deserved a high grade.
- I can never beat my little brother at video games; he has them all mastered.
- Dave is flying to Orlando for spring break, he will be gone a week.
- We are moving to Cincinnati in July and I'll go to college there.
- The storm passed quickly through the area last night, and it caused a lot of damage.
- We will be on vacation next week so we will be unable to attend your party.
- We bought shoes, luggage, hats, and swimsuits at the mall fortunately, we have a large trunk in our car.
- I didn't think it would be necessary to take my umbrella; after all, the sun was shining when I left home.
- Most of my study time is spent on biology it's my toughest class.
- My car ran out of gas therefore I was late for my appointment.
- A fifth-grade student from our school won the spelling competition; she spelled words I had never heard before.
- My younger brother collects aluminum cans to recycle and is saving the money for a new computer.
- Jerry's dad is a pilot for a large airline sometimes he is gone for several days at a time.
- My high school reunion is in three months I wonder if everyone will be there.
- I've missed several classes because I was ill I hope I will pass the course.
- Jeff is planning on going to Las Vegas for vacation; he'll need to take a lot of money.
